A Poem on Inkpop! - To hope is to be free?

Title - To hope is to be free?
Writer - DarkElFGirl
On inkpop    
Poetry: Free Verse

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What would you give to be who you want. With out anyone controlling you.

Everyone has their problems in life. Some can bee helped while others cannot. Everyone tries to find a way to cope with these problems. It is the how that matters the most, and 

what you do in the process of coping.   

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Check out my poem. I need to know rather it needs a lot of work, or if it's fine. Thanks! :)

Link for it  - > -> -> ->                   http://www.inkpop.com/poetry/sad-poems/hope-be-free